lookin sharp my man. I think you did a good job of explaining your idea and pitching it to the audience. A lot of people have this need and you did a good job of letting them know you have a soltution.
Things to work on: It's super hard to speak to yourself in the camera I know, but try to be as natural as possible as if you were talking to your buddy. I'm guilty of the same thing though, haha
Graham, I like how you dressed up for this elevator pitch and did a great job. I also like how you started your pitch, and you grab the audience attention right away. You began by letting the audience to think about the topic you were talking about and explained the solution of your opportunity. Overall, I think you did a great job on this elevator pitch.
Graham, You did a great job with your elevator pitch. I like how you started the pitch with asking the relatable question and by relating to the audience. You explained the solution to this opportunity well by being specific with exactly how the pack would benefit the audience. Many college students can relate with this opportunity and it was a good opportunity to address. While it is hard to talk into a camera, I think you did a good job with that too.
Hey Graham,
ReplyDeletelookin sharp my man. I think you did a good job of explaining your idea and pitching it to the audience. A lot of people have this need and you did a good job of letting them know you have a soltution.
Things to work on: It's super hard to speak to yourself in the camera I know, but try to be as natural as possible as if you were talking to your buddy. I'm guilty of the same thing though, haha
Graham,
ReplyDeleteI like how you dressed up for this elevator pitch and did a great job. I also like how you started your pitch, and you grab the audience attention right away. You began by letting the audience to think about the topic you were talking about and explained the solution of your opportunity. Overall, I think you did a great job on this elevator pitch.
Graham,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job with your elevator pitch. I like how you started the pitch with asking the relatable question and by relating to the audience. You explained the solution to this opportunity well by being specific with exactly how the pack would benefit the audience. Many college students can relate with this opportunity and it was a good opportunity to address. While it is hard to talk into a camera, I think you did a good job with that too.